Do away with dull openings like “One day ”. Instead try one of these for an early morning.
1.
The radiant rays of the morning sun filtered through the canopy of leaves.
2.
The early morning sun shone upon his weather-beaten face. There was a hive of activity
in the block as housewives went about their morning errands.
3.
The bright morning sun brought light and life to the city/ village.
4.
The early morning sun peeped through/ between the mountains/ hills as it left the
horizon.
5.
The brilliant rays of the morning sun shone right through the curtains.
6.
The shimmering blue sea was like myriads of diamonds as the morning sun shone/ played
on it.
7.
The sky was a delightful expanse of blue, dotted with magnolia white clouds.
8.
The sky was a delightful expanse of azure blue. The clouds had no place in the morning
sun where the majestic sun reigned supreme.
9.
The pearly/ white light of pre-dawn was peeping through the grey clouds. It was a
sunrise to behold as the orange hues merged with the pale pink shades.
10.
The warm rays of the morning sun caressed the chubby cheeks of the cheerful children
as the morning breeze tossed their raven-black hair.
11.
The warm beams of the morning sun filtered through the heavily-barred window of the
cold prison cell to greet the occupant who stood up to rush into their embrace.
12.
Come weal or woe, it was the start of another new day.
Do away with dull openings like “One afternoon ”. Instead try one of these for noon.
1. The scorching/ merciless sun at noon beat upon the backs of the pedestrians as they braved the heat to get to a cool spot to eat their midday meal.
2. The sun at noon was high
in the sky, casting my shrunken shadow on the hard ground.
3. The midday sun beat
upon the weather-beaten face and time-ravaged body of the poor farmer.
4. The mind-numbing heat of the afternoon sun made its lazy way into the drowsy, sleep-filled atmosphere of the classroom.
I struggled to keep my mind awake and not succumb to the hypnotic, sleep-inducing tones of my history teacher.
5. The vicious sun shone relentlessly on its victims below, scorching both the
earth and the exposed backs of the labourers.
Do away with dull openings like “One evening/ night ”. Instead try one of these for evenings and nights.
1. The evening sun beckoned me home after a brain-storming session in school/ at work.
2. The splendid sunset had us spellbound as we watching the sinking of the huge ball of fire amidst the splashes of warm
hues of red, orange and yellow. Such was the splendour and grandeur of the sunset.
3. Glorious Sun dimmed his light to let shy Lady Moon step out to take his place. His golden robe faded into the distance
to make way for her glowing gown.
4. The moon was high in the sky, shrouded by misty grey clouds.
5. Beneath the silvery moon, the distant owl hooted hauntingly. The silhouettes of the branches resembled ghostly limbs.
6. The ominous moon seemed to be in cahoots with the nocturnal creatures.
7.
The moon lost its place in the night sky as the blanket of darkness descended on the town.
8.
Darkness had earlier descended like a big blanket, as though the stage was being set after the curtains
closed. The country was swathed in utter darkness save for the twinkling of a few stars scattered in the wide expanse of the
night sky.
9.
The moon had no place in the night sky which was studded with stars.
10.
Lady Moon dimmed her light in much the same way as Florence Nightingale did, with the assurance that
she would pass that way again. How comforting the thought !
11. The swirling wind picked up some loose dirt and scattered it all over the stone pavement and my feet. I quickened my
pace and wrapped my hands around my shoulders. It was nearing midnight.
Instead of the so-boring word “said”, try these words as substitutes in your writing.
Added |
Disapproved |
Interrupted |
Questioned |
Admitted |
Discussed |
Jeered |
Quoted |
Admonished |
Echoed |
Lamented |
Rebuked |
Agreed |
Elaborated |
Lied |
Reported |
Announced |
Enthused |
Mentioned |
Reprimanded |
Apologized |
Exclaimed |
Moaned |
Requested |
Argued |
Explained |
Mocked |
Responded |
Barked |
Expressed |
Mumbled |
Retorted |
Bawled |
Greeted |
Mused |
Scoffed |
Bellowed |
Grizzled |
Muttered |
Shrieked |
Blared |
Groaned |
Narrated |
Sighed |
Blurted |
Groused |
Noted |
Snapped |
Boasted |
Growled |
Objected |
Sneered |
Bristled |
Grunted |
Observed |
Snorted |
Cackled |
Guessed |
Offered |
Stammered |
Cajoled |
Hinted |
Opined |
Stated |
Cautioned |
Hissed |
Ordered |
Surmised |
Chided |
Hollered |
Panted |
Suggested |
Chuckled |
Hooted |
Persuaded |
Teased |
Complained |
Howled |
Pleaded |
Testified |
Concluded |
Informed |
Proclaimed |
Told |
Declared |
Inquired |
Professed |
Urged |
Deduced |
Insinuated |
Promised |
Uttered |
Demanded |
Insisted |
Protested |
Volleyed |
Denied |
Instructed |
Purred |
Warned |
Whimpered |
Whispered |
Wished |
Wondered |
Yelled |
Yelped |
Confessed |
entreated |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Sad Feelings
& Actions |
1. |
Rubbed her eyes till they
became red |
2. |
Said in between her sobs |
3. |
Another sob escaped her throat |
4. |
She could not keep her tears
back |
5. |
Tears streamed/ rolled down
her cheeks |
6. |
Her heart was filled with
sadness/ sorrow/ despair |
7. |
he closed his eyes and dwelled in disappointment |
8. |
Said in a sad and pitiful
tone |
9. |
She could no longer control
her own emotions |
10. |
Her heart felt as if a sharp
knife had slashed it into pieces |
11. |
I took one look at her tear-streaked
face and knew at once something was terribly wrong |
12. |
She was on the verge of tears/
on the verge of breaking down soon |
13. |
a look of pain seared across his wrinkled face as a lone
tear trickled down his cheeks |
14. |
He cried until his voice
was hoarse |
15. |
Her cheerful mood changed
when she received the bad news |
16. |
With a heavy heart, he disclosed
the bad news to the family |
17. |
I closed my eyes and prayed
hard for a miracle to happen |
18. |
Her heart went out to the
pitiful boy |
19. |
After the tragedy, he decided
to face up to reality and dragged himself to work |
20. |
Cold sweat formed on her
forehead |
21. |
tears welled up in his soft brown eyes, forming a blanket
over them |
22. |
Tears welled up in her eyes as she related how the tragedy
happened |
23. |
no words could describe the hurt and anguish
that had been inflicted upon him |
24. |
his watery blue eyes were puffy and bloodshot
from previous nights of crying himself to sleep |
25. |
blinked away the tears that stung my eyes |
26. |
broke down and cried, releasing the torrents of tears that
I had tried so much to keep back |
27. |
a mist of tears blurred my eyes |
28. |
heart welled up like a tight balloon with guilt and sorrow |
29. |
buried his face in his hands, and soft sobbing sounds began
to emerge from him |
30. |
deep pools of emerald eyes, usually dancing with life and
vivacity now lay dull and empty as she gazed off at the night sky |
31. |
I could hold back no longer, the dam that kept my tears
back sprang a leak |
32. |
tears scalded my eyelids, so much that blinking became
an agony |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Happy Feelings
& Actions |
1. |
Her face was beaming with
delight |
2. |
She has a sunny smile across
her face |
3. |
He was as happy as a lark |
4. |
No words could describe his
happiness/ joy |
5. |
Her happiness/ elation knew
no bounds |
6. |
She was crying tears of happiness/
joy |
7. |
He was grinning from ear
to ear |
8. |
She chorused as she danced
around the room |
9. |
On hearing the good news,
everyone crowded around him to offer their congratulations |
10. |
He felt as if a heavy load
had been lifted off his back |
11. |
Then reality set in and he
gave an enormous whoop of joy |
12. |
A sense of exhilaration overcame
him as he pranced about exclaiming wildly |
13. |
He made no effort to hide
his joy |
14. |
The ecstatic boy was a happy
sight to behold, with his sparkling eyes and bubbly enthusiasm |
15. |
I was so jubilant that I could not stay still, but kept
prancing about in the room |
16. |
Her eyes glittered with joyful
expectation as she opened the gift |
17. |
experiencing sensations of
pleasure |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Fear, Despair
& Worry |
1. |
worry wrapped itself around him like a heavy blanket |
2. |
icy hand clutching his heart |
3. |
tried to swallow the cries that sought to emerge from his
throbbing throat |
4. |
a stab of fear pierced through his body |
5. |
stood immobile as her body was seized by fear |
6. |
eyes dilated in terror |
7. |
fear gripped his heart |
8. |
a monstrous terror seized him and his pulse pulsated, pumping
ice-cold dread into every capillary of his body |
9. |
streams of perspiration outlined his trembling jaw |
10. |
intense and immense fear gripped me as terrible thoughts
raced through my mind |
11. |
fear coursed through my veins |
12. |
muscles shivered periodically with beads of perspiration
trickling down the nape of her neck |
13. |
fear sizzled and spread around my body like a powerful
potion |
14. |
my heart pounded loudly, in fact, it sounded like a thousand
drummers in unison, starting a funeral march |
15. |
terror was mounting rapidly within me |
16. |
a mixture of anxiety and terror |
17. |
pale and shaken |
18. |
her voice trembled with the pain of vexation and chagrin |
19. |
his face began to take on the pallor of nausea |
20. |
his eyebrows were deeply knit and his mouth slightly ajar
in his agony |
21. |
She held her breath in trepidation |
22. |
She sank into her chair in
despair |
23. |
Her knees were shaking slightly
and her fingers were trembling uncontrollably |
24. |
Beads of perspiration formed
on his forehead |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Anger |
1. |
mouth dropped open in soundless shock |
2. |
veins protruding and his heart palpitating very fast |
3. |
angry words fell from his quivering lips |
4. |
vexed with him |
5. |
the fire in him raged, spreading from his heart all the
way down to his limbs |
6. |
eyes flashed scarlet and his face was apoplectic with fury
and there was a bright redness on the tips of his ears |
7. |
thoughts of revenge blazed through his mind |
8. |
narrowing his eyes into slits |
9. |
snarled through gritted teeth |
10. |
steam escaped from my nostrils, sending a tinge of anger
knotting in the pit of my stomach |
11. |
vehement argument |
12. |
quivered with fury |
13. |
while the muscles on her body were tensed for an onslaught
of blows |
14. |
they stared up at her, in forceful testimony |
15. |
sharpness in her voice |
16. |
her heart swelled in anger |
17. |
She muttered something rude
under her breath |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Fatigue |
1. |
As he felt fatigue set into his body, he closed his weary
eyes, releasing himself to a deep sleep that a waited him |
2. |
was sweating and panting apparently from having just come
in from the hot sun, his forehead beaded with perspiration |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Embarrassment |
1. |
went a deep shade of pink/ red |
2. |
Her relief was mingled with
embarrassment |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Malice, Hatred
& Spite |
1. |
yelled with spiteful glee |
2. |
watched with mirthful malice |
3. |
her pinched face took an expression of concentrated loathing
as her hand shot out to pick up the plate and bring it down resoundingly |
4. |
with tight smiles of vindictive triumph |
5. |
looked at him with predatory intensity |
6. |
watching him with the lust of vengeance |
No. |
Words & Phrases Describing Other Actions |
1. |
On hearing the fire alarm,
the pupils dashed out like a swarm of bees |
2. |
He thrust out his hand and
demanded for protection money |
3. |
He plucked up courage and
determination |
4. |
Without hesitation, he confessed
to being the mastermind of the whole scheme |
5. |
On hearing that he was responding
to the treatment, everyone heaved a sigh of relief |
6. |
He was a wreck of a man, a skeleton, thin and dry as a
stick |
7. |
Minutes turned into hours/ Minutes passed quickly |
8. |
At this juncture/ At this
point in time/ At this moment |
9. |
Her high-heeled shoes could
be heard from a distance |
10. |
The teacher’s voice
boomed across the room |
11. |
the aroma invaded his nostrils and made him salivate with
desire |
12. |
I was left incredulous that so audacious an act had deserved
so slight a punishment |
13. |
threads of blood spat over his knee |
14. |
The teacher shoved the paper into the face of the lazy
pupil |
15. |
He was staring into the blank space, building castles in
the air as usual |
16. |
He rattled on and on, unaware of the boredom of the people
around him |
17. |
At the ring of the dismissal bell, the pupils hurriedly
shoved their books into their bags and bolted out of the classroom |
18. |
His hair was unkempt, his face unshaven and he looked as
if he had not slept for days |
19. |
Silence filled the room as no one knew the answer to the
question posed by the teacher. Then the silence was broken by Tom |
20. |
There was concern in her voice |
21. |
The peace of the morning was spoilt by the noisy traffic |
22. |
She was ready to go in a jiffy |
23. |
He paced up and down the corridor while waiting for his
wife to deliver their first-born |
24. |
All her efforts to make friends with the new pupil went
down the drain |
25. |
The rays of the afternoon
sun streaked into the classroom/
The rays of the morning sun
streaked into my bedroom |
26. |
No one dared to defy the
principal’s orders |
27. |
Her eyebrows were narrowed
in concentration and her lips were pressed together as she was busy pondering over the knotty problem |
28. |
He glanced at his watch and
realised that it was already late |
29. |
She beckoned me over mysteriously |
30. |
The gang materialised in
front of her |
31. |
Her heavy eyelids weighed
down heavily on her and she struggled to keep them open |
32. |
After coming home from school,
I decided to take forty winks before starting on my homework |